Tuesday, August 14, 2012

This is a peice of the Adventure's of Yollie, Mimi, and Cookie! Find out what happens! Hope u enjoy! :)

-That very next day, Mimi called all of her friends. Everything was according to plan. They arrived at 11:25 am precisely, when the most costumers were at the market.
-Mimi said that she was grounded from the TV for the next month.  But as she did always, she just waved it off like a pesky fly.
-“Ok,” whispered Cookie, holding up a walkie-talkie. “We’ll use these. Mimi, Yollie, you guys will scout out ahead of Acorn, Shea, and I, who will be loading up with that basket,” she gestured toward a stray shopping cart in the parking lot. “Etwanza, you have to be the distraction, and secretly keep an eye out on Mrs. Mimi. If she does wonder about what we are doing, distract her with anything at all! Everyone clear on the plan?”
-“What do we do once were done?” asked Acorn.
-“Oh, we will have to sneak around the cashier. That’ll be the hardest part. Try to block the stuff in the basket so none of the Lovie cashiers will notice. Get it? Got it? Good. Let’s go!”
-The friends slapped, clapped, snapped, slapped, and cheered. Then, they headed inside.

-Yollie was in the lead with Mimi at her side. 
-She peered out into the isle and gave a thumbs-up.
-Acorn pushed the squeaky empty cart into the aisle. Cookie grabbed a bag of peppermints along the way and threw it into the basket.
-“Stock!” Yollie whispered to them, and then Mimi ran to the end of the aisle to keep a lookout. Yollie went to the opposite side. 
-Cookie shoved all the snack bags of chips into the cart, and Acorn pushed it slowly forward as Cookie emptied the shelf.
-Mimi squealed. “Someone’s coming!”
-Yollie swung her head around and franticly whispered, “Push the cart this way!”
-Acorn ran down the aisle with Cookie at her heels, holding a few packages of chocolate-chunk brownies.
-“Hurry!” cried Mimi. They squeaked around the corner and shoved the cart into the freezer section, with a Lovie leaving down on the far end.
-Shea slapped her hands onto her cheeks a few times. “OMG! That was too close!”
-“Yea…” Cookie said slowly, and pointed down the aisle. “But we hit the jackpot!”
-Ice-cream. It was everywhere. All sorts of flavors in all sorts of shapes.
-Shea hopped and let out a squeak, then raced down to collect some.  
-“Shea, wait!” Acorn cried. “Stop!”  She whipped her head around to look at us with her wide eyes. “I hear Mrs. Mimi!”
-Everyone panicked. “Where’s Etwanza?!” Yollie yelled.
-Mimi grabbed her arm. “Not now, ditch the cart, we need to go!”
-We ran across the grocery store. In between the aisles, I saw a glimpse of Mrs. Mimi, but was jabbering with Etwanza.  Etwanza noticed us and nodded slightly, but Mrs. Mimi just kept on talking, looking out in front of her.
-Mimi was in the lead. We sprinted down the middle, long, corridor, and knocked over shopping carts, which were exiting the aisle.
-The speaker kept buzzing. “Clean up in aisle 5!” “Clean up in aisle 2!” “Would Kathy please come to attend aisle 7?”
-Shea squeaked an apology every time we tipped over a cart. Cookie grabbed a box of chips and a package of candy on the way.
-Etwanza joined us, but Mrs. Mimi was right behind her.
-Mimi didn’t seem to know where she was heading. We entered the produce section, and she stopped us.
-“Um,” she glanced around.
-Some of the Lovies whose baskets were upset by us started to chase us with their fists in the air.
-Now we really started to panic. It was complete chaos! Shea started to burst into tears at the fists.
-We flew towards the exit and ran for the truck. “Hurry!” cried Etwanza, leaping in the driver’s seat.
-Shea sat shotgun while the rest of us piled up in the back.
-“Hit it!” screamed Mimi, and the truck floored it out of the parking lot.  
-We gripped onto the sides to keep from falling out as we were slung from side to side.
-The truck crashed onto the highway, and we sped out.
-Once we were going at a normal speed, Mimi suddenly jerked upward. “My Jeep!” she said. “Etwanza, go to the place where we left my Jeep!”
-After a few minutes of driving, we slowed to a stop next to the Jeep. Mimi was the first to climb out and race to it, hugging its sides.
-Shea sniffled. “What do we do now?” she whispered.
-Acorn sighed.
 

Friday, August 10, 2012

Here is the first part of The Adventures of Yollie, Mimi, and Cookie! Hope u enjoy!


-“Step on it!” cried Yollie.

-Mimi floored the pedal, and with a lurch, the jeep screeched out of the parking lot of Mimi’s Merchandise.

-Yollie grabbed the side of the car and with her other hand, held her sunhat tight on her head.

-Cookie was screaming in the back. “Here they come!!”

-Yollie stuck her head out and peered back. A red pick-up was right behind them and Mrs. Mimi was stumbling out of her grocery store, yelling at the three-some in the jeep.  

-Mimi flew onto the main highway and cackled.

-The red pick-up chased them down the road. In the back of the truck, Acorn was laughing and in front of her, a beautiful Lovie with long, curly brown hair flew that around her. Shea looked rather panicked and yelled at Etwanza to hurry up.

-Driving the red truck was a crazy-looking bear with huge loops in her ears. Etwanza’s messy brown hair was tied up in a sloppy bun, and she too was looking fearful.  

-They sped down the highway at astonishing speed. Yollie’s hand was ripped off the arm-rest and she fell toward Mimi as they made a sharp left.

-Black tire-streaks were marked into the road. Yollie heard something pop down in the engine of the Jeep.

-“Mimi!” Cookie yelled from the back. “Stop! Things that aren’t supposed to by flying off are flying off!”

“Abandon ship!” cried Mimi, and the Jeep swerved to a stop. The teens hopped out, and as the red pick-up skidded past, and Mimi, Cookie, and Yollie grabbed on to the side of the car. Acorn and Shea pulled them in while Etwanza sped out.

-The Jeep started to smoke. Everyone was in the back, sitting down. “My Jeep!” sobbed Mimi.

-“We’ll come back for it later,” said Acorn softly, patting Mimi’s shoulder.

-Yollie saw Shea looking very scared. “What do we do now?” Shea asked.

-Etwanza seemed to know where she was going, though. The Lovies hunched down in the back of the truck on the highway, and after around 10 minutes of driving, the truck slowed to a stop.

-They all got out. Before Yollie could ask where they were, Shea giggled and jumped up and down “The mall! You are so awesome!”

-Etwanza grinned. “Had to go someplace where Mimi’s mom wouldn’t go.”


-Shea squealed at every store they passed on the way to the food court. “Abercrombie!” she cried. “Coach! AH! They have a Coach store! Ooh, Claire’s! Oh my goodness, Hollister!! ”

-Yollie was in charge of dragging goggle-eyed Shea along the white marble tiles. “Come on, Shea! Food now, shop later.”

-They finally reached their destination and orders burgers and shakes.

-Once everyone was settled down sipping their shakes, Mimi explained what happened in her mom’s store.

-“Ok, so I put a stink bomb in the fish isle! No one knew about it, and costumers thought it was the fish! It was so funny; you should have seen their faces as they walked through!” Mimi broke into a fit of laughter.

-Shea looked disgusted. “Eww,” she said. Acorn giggled. Cookie bit her lip. Etwanza laughed as hard as Mimi.

-“Well,” Yollie broke in, “What should we do next?”

-Mimi’s laughter died down. She chewed her hamburger and stared at the tall glass ceiling.

-Everyone was quiet, thinking. “Maybe we should get on the speakers and announce that all shoes are all on sale for 90% off!” Shea said excitedly.

-“What?!” said Acorn, “Of course not! How about we go shopping ourselves? The snack pile at the tree house is very low….”

-Mimi grinned mischievously. “Yea,” she said slowly.

-It was the final plan. Everyone slapped their hands together, broke up, clapped twice, snapped once, and slapped hands again, this time, grabbing on to one another’s. “Here’s to adventure!” cried Mimi. All of the Lovies cheered.


-That very next day, Mimi called all of her friends. Everything was according to plan. They arrived at 11:25 am precisely, when the most costumers were at the market.

-Mimi said that she was grounded from the TV for the next month.  But as she did always, she just waved it off like a pesky fly.

-“Ok,” whispered Cookie, holding up a walkie-talkie. “We’ll use these. Mimi, Yollie, you guys will scout out ahead of Acorn and I, who will be loading up with that basket,” she gestured toward a stray shopping cart in the parking lot. “Shea, you have to be the distraction, and secretly keep an eye out on Mrs. Mimi. If she does wonder about what we are doing, distract her with anything at all! Everyone clear on the plan?”

-“What do we do once were done?” asked Acorn.

-“Oh, we will have to sneak around the cashier. That’ll be the hardest part. Try to block the stuff in the basket so none of the Lovie cashiers will notice. Get it? Got it? Good. Let’s go!”

-The friends slapped, clapped, snapped, slapped, and cheered. Then, they headed inside.

Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Sneak peek of a story about the teen Lovies!

Hi everyone! I am writing about the misadventures of Yollie, Mimi, and Cookie, but as 16 year-olds!
They are getting into loads of trouble, but will that stop them and their best friends, Shea, Acorn, and Etwanza?
Experience the adventure of Mimi's Merchendise, Mrs. Mimi's store. What will the Lovies do?
Find out in this sneak peek of Yollie, Mimi, and Cookie's fun stories about heir life as a teen!
I will post the preiveiw on Friday or Saterday! ;)