Friday, August 10, 2012

Here is the first part of The Adventures of Yollie, Mimi, and Cookie! Hope u enjoy!


-“Step on it!” cried Yollie.

-Mimi floored the pedal, and with a lurch, the jeep screeched out of the parking lot of Mimi’s Merchandise.

-Yollie grabbed the side of the car and with her other hand, held her sunhat tight on her head.

-Cookie was screaming in the back. “Here they come!!”

-Yollie stuck her head out and peered back. A red pick-up was right behind them and Mrs. Mimi was stumbling out of her grocery store, yelling at the three-some in the jeep.  

-Mimi flew onto the main highway and cackled.

-The red pick-up chased them down the road. In the back of the truck, Acorn was laughing and in front of her, a beautiful Lovie with long, curly brown hair flew that around her. Shea looked rather panicked and yelled at Etwanza to hurry up.

-Driving the red truck was a crazy-looking bear with huge loops in her ears. Etwanza’s messy brown hair was tied up in a sloppy bun, and she too was looking fearful.  

-They sped down the highway at astonishing speed. Yollie’s hand was ripped off the arm-rest and she fell toward Mimi as they made a sharp left.

-Black tire-streaks were marked into the road. Yollie heard something pop down in the engine of the Jeep.

-“Mimi!” Cookie yelled from the back. “Stop! Things that aren’t supposed to by flying off are flying off!”

“Abandon ship!” cried Mimi, and the Jeep swerved to a stop. The teens hopped out, and as the red pick-up skidded past, and Mimi, Cookie, and Yollie grabbed on to the side of the car. Acorn and Shea pulled them in while Etwanza sped out.

-The Jeep started to smoke. Everyone was in the back, sitting down. “My Jeep!” sobbed Mimi.

-“We’ll come back for it later,” said Acorn softly, patting Mimi’s shoulder.

-Yollie saw Shea looking very scared. “What do we do now?” Shea asked.

-Etwanza seemed to know where she was going, though. The Lovies hunched down in the back of the truck on the highway, and after around 10 minutes of driving, the truck slowed to a stop.

-They all got out. Before Yollie could ask where they were, Shea giggled and jumped up and down “The mall! You are so awesome!”

-Etwanza grinned. “Had to go someplace where Mimi’s mom wouldn’t go.”


-Shea squealed at every store they passed on the way to the food court. “Abercrombie!” she cried. “Coach! AH! They have a Coach store! Ooh, Claire’s! Oh my goodness, Hollister!! ”

-Yollie was in charge of dragging goggle-eyed Shea along the white marble tiles. “Come on, Shea! Food now, shop later.”

-They finally reached their destination and orders burgers and shakes.

-Once everyone was settled down sipping their shakes, Mimi explained what happened in her mom’s store.

-“Ok, so I put a stink bomb in the fish isle! No one knew about it, and costumers thought it was the fish! It was so funny; you should have seen their faces as they walked through!” Mimi broke into a fit of laughter.

-Shea looked disgusted. “Eww,” she said. Acorn giggled. Cookie bit her lip. Etwanza laughed as hard as Mimi.

-“Well,” Yollie broke in, “What should we do next?”

-Mimi’s laughter died down. She chewed her hamburger and stared at the tall glass ceiling.

-Everyone was quiet, thinking. “Maybe we should get on the speakers and announce that all shoes are all on sale for 90% off!” Shea said excitedly.

-“What?!” said Acorn, “Of course not! How about we go shopping ourselves? The snack pile at the tree house is very low….”

-Mimi grinned mischievously. “Yea,” she said slowly.

-It was the final plan. Everyone slapped their hands together, broke up, clapped twice, snapped once, and slapped hands again, this time, grabbing on to one another’s. “Here’s to adventure!” cried Mimi. All of the Lovies cheered.


-That very next day, Mimi called all of her friends. Everything was according to plan. They arrived at 11:25 am precisely, when the most costumers were at the market.

-Mimi said that she was grounded from the TV for the next month.  But as she did always, she just waved it off like a pesky fly.

-“Ok,” whispered Cookie, holding up a walkie-talkie. “We’ll use these. Mimi, Yollie, you guys will scout out ahead of Acorn and I, who will be loading up with that basket,” she gestured toward a stray shopping cart in the parking lot. “Shea, you have to be the distraction, and secretly keep an eye out on Mrs. Mimi. If she does wonder about what we are doing, distract her with anything at all! Everyone clear on the plan?”

-“What do we do once were done?” asked Acorn.

-“Oh, we will have to sneak around the cashier. That’ll be the hardest part. Try to block the stuff in the basket so none of the Lovie cashiers will notice. Get it? Got it? Good. Let’s go!”

-The friends slapped, clapped, snapped, slapped, and cheered. Then, they headed inside.

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